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SHORT ESSAY, BIG CHALLENGE

Finally, you get to be heard! After years of stressing out about grades and test scores, with the personal statement or insight questions you get to show your authentic self. Better still, the admissions officers actually want to know you (really!), but you only have 650 or 1,400 words. From initial brainstorming through final polish, I'll guide you with thought-provoking questions and honest, productive feedback, as you write a personal statement that is your best work: authentic, compelling, and memorable.

THE A-HA! MOMENT

"But I'm just like every other science nerd"

"I don't have a hook, I like all my classes the same"

"My grades aren't great, that's all they'll notice."

The struggle is real. A lot of students have similar backgrounds, experiences, and interests, and many can't think of ways to present themselves that stand out. That's why I dig, talk, question and explore – because there's nothing like that "a-ha" moment when the student and I finally lock on to the topic, the story that makes them come alive on the page as an individual. So often the best stories pop up in a throwaway comment or random aside that comes up while we're talking about something else:

"…since I can't be a Bollywood princess I might as well…"

"…it's like that time when I quit ballet…"

"…I could always paint another mural in the garage…"

Wait, what?! Tell me more…! Each of those random comments led to a stellar and successful essay.

SUCCESS STORIES

The Bollywood Fan

The Ex-Ballet Dancer

The Muralist

TESTIMONIALS

Parents Say

"Amanda did an amazing job working with my daughter! They landed on a great topic that really showed an important side of Lola and really captured her voice and how she sees the world. A+"

— Sara J. Hasman, parent of Lola S., Northwestern class of 2023

"As a parent, I felt completely lost in the essay process. Amanda guided both my son and me with patience and expertise. Worth every penny."

— Michael R., Parent

"Amanda understands teenagers and knows how to bring out their best stories. She made the whole process less stressful for our entire family."

— Jennifer L., Parent

Students Say

Lucy G. - Williams Class of 2023

Amanda Marks

HOW I GOT HERE

I'm a product of the New York City private school world and a graduate of Wesleyan University, so the ecosystem of elite admissions has long been familiar to me. I started working in the office of test prep giant The Princeton Review when I was a senior in high school. After college, while growing a career in the entertainment industry, I consistently worked on the side as a tutor for the SAT, GMAT & LSAT.

Because it's more personal and creative than test prep, my favorite part was always when I'd continue to work with my standardized test students on their essays and applications. Even after I stopped tutoring, friends with kids would reach out for essay help, all too aware that no matter how smart and accomplished they might be, it's utterly impossible for a parent to help with this task. That's where the Auntie part comes in. I love digging in deep with my essay students and getting to know them through this exciting-yet-vulnerable, life-changing period. In fact, I consider it a privilege.

My story-telling chops are top-notch. I'm an award-winning writer/producer who did years in the trenches of the movie trailer business before pivoting to non-fiction television. Most recently I've been working on Discovery Channel's Expedition Unknown for six seasons and have filmed in over 20 countries. Helping students find their stories remains my favorite creative work. Based in Los Angeles, I work remotely with students across the country and around the world.

SERVICES & RATES

Hourly Rate

$250

Personal Statement Package

Your main 500-650-word Common App or Scoir/Coalition for College Essay

  • Discovery sessions to find YOUR story
  • Brainstorming and outlining
  • Multiple rounds of feedback
  • Guided final polish
  • Second editor / fresh eyes to review final draft prior to submission

Typically takes between 7-10 hours total. We'll spend however many hours it takes to get it right.

$1,500

UC Personal Insight Questions Package

  • All four PIQs (350 words each) from strategy to final drafts
  • Strategic selection of which 4 prompts to answer
  • Brainstorming unique angles for each
  • Making sure they work together as a portfolio
  • Multiple rounds of feedback on all four questions
  • Guided final polish on all four questions
  • Second editor / fresh eyes to review final draft prior to submission
$1,850

Additional Questions: Custom Packages

In addition to the main personal statement, some schools require additional unique short answer questions. If I'm working with your student on the main essay and you need support for additional essays, let's discuss package options.

A Note on Accessibility

I believe every talented student deserves great essay support, regardless of family finances. Each season, I reserve a limited number of spots at reduced rates for families with demonstrated financial need. If you're applying for college financial aid and these rates are out of reach, please mention it during our initial call.

FREE INITIAL CONSULTATION

Ready to get started? Contact me for a free consultation to discuss your student's needs and goals.

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